CADIZ`S CARNIVALS.
Hello, we (Mario, Alvaro, Niza and Pablo) are ging to the Cadiz`s Carnivals the next weekend. We are going to my mother`s car. We sleep and more on my uncle`s house. the saturday we are going to walk at the beach and for the evening we are going to the carnivals and later drink a lot with the "gaditanos". the sunday more less the same and the monday we are going to Seville on the evening.
Every time you write a day of the week it should start by a capital letter and NO ARTICLE. Those are very basic mistakes!
ResponderEliminarON my mother's car
IN the evening
No t despides? No le dices q se apunte al plan?
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